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Review of Jonathan L. Howard’s Johannes Cabal the Necromancer

Johannes Cabal the Necromancer

Wry wit, Faustian bargaining, and a wacky sense of the absurd are all elements of Jonathan L. Howard’s first novel, Johannes Cabal the Necromancer. The opening scene presents our discursive master of the dark arts, Johannes, on a journey into the nether realms of Hell. But far from gore and horror, Howard’s nine circles are filled with lightly-inflamed humor and the sense that everything is much smaller than it should be. Johannes must go through a bureaucratic system as frustrating as Kafka and as delightfully estranged as a Terry Gilliam before reaching the King of Pride himself, Satan. Satan, mind you, comes off a particularly silly cad, all the while enhanced with British vernacular and aroused anger. There is a bargain between our beloved necromancer and the worst demon, having something to do with a reclamation of a soul or two, and then a flash back to the world of the living.

Johannes tracks from one scene to the next recruiting minions at times (like his ghoulish brother Horst), and creating them at others (like Bones, an undead concoction made out of a bone and some hair and some skin—and unfortunately lacking any fat whatsoever). The goal is simple, but the environs are not: fantastical English countryside mixing industrial-age technology with medieval peasantry and poverty. You don’t really know when the story is taking place, but aren’t these stories supposed to be timeless anyway? Inevitably one thing is clear: this is a land of the traveling carnival, the carnival that shows up when it shows up and moves on to the next down when one has been exhausted.

The book’s small page count makes for an exciting read but hardly enough to leave the reader satisfied. There are many jumps in the plot that bring up questions where there did not have to be any; where some writers throw in side narratives, Howard approaches the idea minimally, instead incorporating some storytelling innovation through typography and lists. Characters too are damaged, often feeling rushed and worn at the same time. When we first meet Horst in the crypt of a wealthy family, he comes off as ravenous and abrasive; by the end of the book we notice he is nothing more than a sponge of soft emotion. Layla, a seductress made of Latex, is crucial to the pivot in action near the end of the story, but where did her presence ever come from? We never feel like the characters are that important, and this harkens to the wildfire style Howard provides. But for such an epic tale, why not give death a little more life?

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You’re a Poltroon

“ACK” by Joy Williams

in Honored Guest (Vintage, 2005)

Review: THREE STARS

When you remember a story is good for just being good, isn’t that important enough? Get out there and read Joy Williams’ stories, even if it means they won’t stick.

“Hunters” by John Edgar Wideman

in God’s Gym (Mariner, 2006)

Review: TWO STARS

While this sociological heartbreak is a mild approach at the racism behind a group of whites raping a black, but the pacing and plot shifts force the story to fall flat on its face just after its initial haunting opening.

“A Radically Condensed History of Post-Industrial Life” & “Death is Not the End” by David Foster Wallace

in Brief Interviews with Hideous Men (Back Bay Books, 2000)

Review: FIVE STARS

The former story is a paragraph-long explanation on just about every relationship that can exist in this country; the latter is a rhythmic laugh-spree critique of poet laureates in the United States.

“Mnemonics” by Kurt Vonnegut

in Bagombo Snuff Box (Berkley Trade, 2000)

Review: FOUR STARS

To say I remember all of this story isn’t the point; the point is that if you want a cute story about distraction, memory, and secretaries, jump right in.

“The Shawl” by Cynthia Ozick

in Best American Short Stories of the Century (ed. John Updike) (Mariner, 2000)

Review: FOUR STARS

At the beginning of this yarn, a gaping wound that stinks of Eastern Europe’s charming poverties, you want the shawl to be a part of you. By the end you like the distance.

“The Ideal Village” by John Updike

in Trust Me (Ballantine, 1996)

Review: TWO STARS

It’s hard to hate on Updike, but this story doesn’t settle in any of the ways it begs to. The edges are torn up, and the characters aren’t fleshed.

“Erosion” by Ali Smith

in The Whole Story and Other Stories (Anchor, 2004)

Review: THREE STARS

It’s not difficult reading women writers who have guts; it’s just hard finding them. There’s nothing wrong with ant battles either.

“The Woman at the Gas Station” by Bernhard Schlink

in Flights of Love (trans. John E. Woods) (Vintage, 2002)

Review: ONE STAR

John E. Woods, what happened? Maybe it’s the plot’s fault—trying to take a surrealist approach to the most boring love story ever is fatal.

“The Farther You Go” by Richard Russo

in The Whores Child (Vintage, 2003)

Review: THREE STARS

I’ve always been fond of reading Russo’s Cheeveresque mouth-froth-laden stories, but it’s hard figuring out why middle aged conflict appeals so.

“May We Be Forgiven” by A. M. Holmes

in Best American Short Stories (ed. Salman Rushdie) (Mariner, 2008)

Review: FOUR STARS

Abandon: coincidence, convenience, understanding, smooth settings, known environments, all even trajectories. Get ready to be shocked, too.

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To moue is to pout

At work I read short stories. Many of them. I try to keep it systematic: one story from one book and then move on to the next book. I made an exception the other day–I read two stories by David Foster Wallace. Exceptions must be made in such cases. When I get to Sixty Stories by Barthelme, I’ll probably read a couple instead of just one. Stories that are ultra short are ultra short for the same reason short poems are ultra short. But a good story often makes you want to read another good story in succession. Maybe poetry works the same way.

Anyway, here are some pouts of 140 characters (or less), reviewing said stories.

“Chekhov and Zulu” by Salman Rushdie

in East, West (Vintage, 1994)

Review:  THREE STARS

Star Trek-obsessed terrorists really know how to talk to audiences like they don’t exist. Just where does this story take place, and what is all the coded fuss saying?

“Entropy” by Thomas Pynchon

in Slow Learner: Early Stories (Back Bay Books, 1985)

Review: FOUR STARS

Replace the cute jazz pacifism of Kerouac with writing detective, harmful: a wallop noticeable more for the smeary aftermath than the slumped crack opening.

“The Fasting Artist” by Franza Kafka

in The Transformation and Other Stories (Penguin, 1995)

Review: TWO STARS

It’s still tough to find a good translation of this classic. Hunger doesn’t have to mean archaic language. Starvation doesn’t have to mean words let out to dry.

“The Sandbank Sage” by Jack Kerouac

in Atop an Underwood: Early Stories and Other Writings (Penguin, 2000)

Review: THREE STARS

To get to know the Beats is to read them before they were Beats. Kerouac’s early work is an obvious quest-leg toward bop-prosody, but he hasn’t found his voice yet.

“Remains of the Night” by John McNally

in Who Can Save Us Now? (Free Press, 2008)

Review: TWO STARS

If you want to read about a faux-superhero/villain dejection called the Silverfish, check out this witty, disgusting, and highly blasé tale told by the bug’s butler.

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Responding to: So Many Books (pt. 2)

First of all, if you’re interested in this great little book by Gabriel Zaid that tackles publishing, reading, and writing in the 21st century, you may want to read the first part of my response here.

“And just a few thousand copies, read by the right people, are enough to change the course of conversation, the boundaries of literature, and our intellectual life. What sense is there, then, in lunching books into infinity so that they are lost in the chaos?” (pg. 49)

Though it often reaches sentimental altitudes when a book-buyer stumbles into a shop and finds something rare, dignified, and gleaming through all of its rarity, the great implications of large printings is that they are potentially in many places for many uses; while certain texts, such as a new James Paterson novel or Eat This Not That pocket-book, are not at face value worth much of anything historically-speaking, even these texts represent our culture at the very moment, at this very statis in time.

To fill future shelves in Albania, Nigeria, and Haiti with books of these, which have value in their historo-cultural content, as well as perhaps intro-to-English dialectics, there may in fact be an imperialistic attitude reached with trying to send books to other countries. It’s like an invasion, to some degree; I remember working at my college book store and at the end of the semester, during the “buy-back period,” any books that were not resold to the book store would be thrown into the “send to Africa” bins located conveniently outside the book store’s exit. I can’t imagine Plato’s Cave or advanced Chemistry having much relevance in Somalia or Ethiopia, but I still argue that the presence of them is better than the presence of zero books at all. Having some sort of material to give away (though the material would probably be sold to these countries through our intricate, ever-arching web of consumerist non-profit and humanitarian organizations at some level) might help somebody. The chances might rise with every book you’ve got flying over there.

And at the same time, regardless of the language and the country the book comes from, its presence somewhere on this earth is tangible; it will likely exist, pages white or darkly yellowed or molding to mush, continuously. If human beings wipe their digital megaverses out (through cyber terrorism or technological evolution or what-have-you), the many pages in the many books will last in lockers, walls, chests, coffins, time-capsules, monuments, bunkers, and on and on and on. Our dependency on the intangible, the digital to be specific about it, is worrying; the presence of the physical object is balancing.

Of course the book-burning groups, which I recently fantasized about and which equally stem from the Nazis, Ray Bradbury and Wall-E, will probably come along after they realize how much paper trash really is out there, and will make it their primary goal to rid us of our archivable literature. You can already see such disposals through recycling bins, and even way before our “green age” began, at the local dumps. Ever been to a trash center? The piles of magazines are outstanding. One time in grade school we had to visit a local trash crematorium of sorts. I went off on my own and found the paper disposal building, on the floor of which were many a porn magazine. As you can imagine, a youth of the countryside like myself was enamored, enraptured even, by all the smut on the ground. I even wanted to steal the shit and take it back with me to drool over during the endless yellow busride back to school. Thankfully, fortunately, I never got that chance.

“[T]he true role of books, which is to continue our conversation by other means.” (pg. 49)

If the role of books is to continue conversation, then it means that conversation can be continued outside of the verbal communication environment; is another way of expressing language(s). But is it necessary? Here’s a brief, premature rundown of what books do: create ownership (ownership of art, ownership of material goods, collectors, et cetera), create hubris and pride (again, view the owner(s) of the creation), influence society on a cultural level both positively and negatively (especially via marketing tactics), cause isolation (and yes it’s good for an escape once in a while from the throws and exhaustion of living in a good or bad society, but what is that saying about the society if we want to escape it?), provide information to those that might not be able to get it via a real, living person or conversational voice, allow referencing (our memories are like balloons and do have limits), allow for studying (see previous isolation note), and are generally a displacement of information (instead of just telling you what I want to say, I’m going to write it down first, and maybe be more elegant, poetic, and refined, but you’ll have to wait a second or minute or hour or day because the book has to be printed and shipped and so on and so on . . .)–but there’s more!

Books are wonderful items in that they allow for the mass presentation of ideas (of the author and editor, yes, but also extending to the ideas of many others) through a conversation that cannot possibly take place between the voice in the book and the entire globe. Though oral histories could still, perhaps, be continued today even with our zany technologies, the written language allows you to take something valuable (contraceptive pamphlets) or influential (the Bible) and distribute it to an audience that normally wouldn’t be had. They are amazingly spreadable, and amazingly efficient. “Oh, I read this great book the other day about this guy who died on a cross in the name of forgiveness and I want you to read it, but I see I have to go to work way over here right now and you over there right now, and it’d just be easier for me to give you the damn thing!” Books are also great ways for developing ideas because they all for a concentrated form of interpretation; something you may or may not have gotten to the same degree through verbal communication, that standard Socratic conversation.

But do we need books to continue on? Evolution and revolution would probably be much slower, yes, but all the shit we get bombarded with, the tabloids and the faux-news, the advertising and the slush-culture, all of which probably numbs us down more than anything else, would not be as concentrated if the only medium of idea-exchange was through verbal communication. I can just imagine a busy Egyptian or Indian street, books not available to anyone, where everyone is yelling and trying to get a conversation going, for better or for worse, to buy, to sell, to trade, to exchange, nobody in their homes reading, everyone jabbering away. Maybe life would be too overwhelming without books; especially with a population like that of todays.

I’d definitely want to pull an Edward Abbey and head for the hills; or am I thinking of the Unibomber? Or am I thinking of Emily Dickenson? Or am I thinking of or last president? Or am I thinking of all the Mainers up there right now sucking in the sweet pine air, canoeing and paddling . . . but then again, it’s reaching a point where the huddled masses have relieved themselves of nearly all verbal communication with text messaging, cell phone emails, and of course our personal computer station hubs where we can live out our non-verbal existence surfing the net, writing blog posts, or living in virtual gaming realities; soon we won’t have to talk to each other at all, verbally. Remember those headsets that came out for some of those games on the PS2 and X-Box? Did those even take off after a year or so of being in existence? I wouldn’t have anything to say to the guy I just fragged with a grenade launcher for the 5000th time either.

“Culture isn’t a product, of course. But what then are oranges, orchids, birds, sunsets? Anything can begin as revelation and become currency, an object, a commodity. To avoid this, a process of certification is invented, as ambiguous as the object itself. The word becomes a notarized contract; the academic title provides a guarantee; the insitution legitimizes; the stamp of cognoscenti certifies.” (pg. 53)

There are numerous issues with this statement, many to which are obvious and widely debatable–I mean come on, culture isn’t a product? Are we sure? What about Disney World culture? What part of that isn’t merely the selling of souls in order to please some cash-holder? And aren’t we under one huge gridded umbrella of control and systematic sales, anyway? African music: Putamayo; Alabama quilts: art museum posters; poetry books: college Creative Writing markets (which is chronologically linear, ascending steeply). Hip hop is arguably one of the biggest sold cultures, or pieces of culture, in America (and in other countries today); in America hip hop not only has an audience through the African American communities (and most of the emcees marketed come directly from these communities because they know, they “know,” these communities, and how better to push a product than by having someone who bought and ate up the product in the first place teaching you about the market?), but also has an audience through the middle and upper classes–it’s very cool and emotionally, socially rewarding for hip white kid A (like myself, for instance) to enjoy hip hop, even though hip hops largest roots didn’t come from my own background.

I remember loving Busta Rhymes, Notorious BIG, and Jermaine Dupree in 5th grade; I went on to like the Beastie Boys and Eminem and Limp Bizkit, those rappers/rap groups I could racially identify myself with (being from Maine, race was always a big thing, though a subconscious and repressed thing) in high school, and then continued the white rapper obsession with artists like Sage Francis in early college. Fascinatingly, I really got into Lil Wayne due to the music site Pitchfork in Junior and Senior year of college, and since then have been blending my fascination for white hip hop emcees (including Aesop Rock and Atmosphere) with old school, gangsta, crunk, Lil Wayne, and other shitty contemporary hip hop.

Lately I’ve been on a deejay kick with Peanut Butter Wolf and Charizma, and have gotten into some of the whackiest, though prolific, emcees like MF Doom and Q-Tip, but I still think it’s funny when I listen to Clipse and pretend like Atlanta coke dealing is any way relevant to me, or that there is something beyond the absurd that I’m gaining from listening to it. Though the beats are pretty cool. Also of importance is the new “white kids hip hop” that is cropping up in response to the interest gentrifiers and boojie hip kids with their interest in a predominantly black genre: artists like Cool Kids are coming around and providing hip hop directed particularly toward this audience; it’s no longer about the streets, but about growing up playing video games, going to house parties, and one-two-buckle-my-shoe. Is this really a bad thing? It’s certainly the way of the biz, so to speak, and its pretty obvious; but there are tons of undergrond circles I’m not even touching. The poetry of the emcees that you will never hear is still going on out there, regardless of entire cultures, subcultures, and art forms being sold off like hotcakes. People are spouting their rhymes, just like they are writing their books, and providing them (not even with monetary charge, sometimes, like in the case of e-books like the one I just released, Toward Pandemic!) for smaller circles, narrowed audiences.

Going back to the quote, I instantly tried to think of things in the world that aren’t looked at as objects, as commodities, today. I instantly thought of the article with CA Conrad and Brenda Iijima: the Interlude on Poetics as Dirt, and I thought about dirt. While land, this semi-tangible, semi-corporeal concept we humans, Americans in particular, zoom onto through our wonderful capitalist system, is all about dirt, it’s not really about dirt. Unless you’re a geologist or gardener, you probably won’t walk down the street, especially in an urban environment, and say: look at all this prosperous DIRT I have on my hands. Yet we could, and I’m sure it’s only a matter of time. Maybe it will eventually be used in terms of fuel or maybe we will start selling handfuls of earth for bottlecaps. There are strange things in this world like dirt, and perhaps rain, that many of us probably wouldn’t hold as objects. I mean, going after the thing itself, we could easily classify all of this as object this and object that, but it’s not the same in the sense that you might ever want it to be an object. For lack of a bigger vocabulary, things like dirt, rain, and . . . you can see I’m struggling with additional examples here . . . even dustballs are resources but they remain neglected resources. The source of the neglect is that we are distracted; however, once we have (if we do) completely wrecked our state of affairs/existences and have nothing left, we may turn to these resources and certify them, legitimize them, but until that time, they remain passive.

But here’s a curious thought: for such a passive thing that we deal with regularly, weather has a presence in our daily life (usually a hatred or bland regard) that takes up space in conversation more than anything else; and yet, we never go beyond the step of liking or hating weather. Another standardization of our daily life to keep us from getting a little too worked up, a little too out of the daily grind? I can just imagine another world, very similar to ours, only sans weather channel, where shamanic businessmen do rain dances in the morning before getting their grande lattes and jumping on the el for a quick trip to the office, in a world where water is scarce and begged for. I can just imagine people doing lightning dances, when all the lightning comes all the time and people are shitting their minds apart hoping they are one of thousands getting zapped on that particular day. I can just imagine people doing earth dances, eating dirt, crafting dirt, art-ifying dirt, because all the book burners came and burned their books, and all their virtual reality servers crashed, and all the bottlecaps were spent, and then all we would have would be the dust and the dustballs, that last part of our bodies floating around in the corners of the room. I think people would love and hate and acknowledge and interact with each and every thing in this world before they went after the gray dirt/skin particles hiding out in the corners of the rooms. Yeah, sweep away, dust away; the object as anti-object. Maybe poets turn into dustballs after they die.

Part three of this article series will be written soon, but until then, buy the book, and for goodness sake, pay attention!

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Responding to: So Many Books (pt. 1)

So Many Books

Recently I was given a copy of So Many Books (2003) by Gabriel Zaid thanks to Paul Dry (of Paul Dry Publishing in Philadelphia). This book is a collection of essays which delves into the world of reading, writing, publishing the self, and publishing others in the 21st century. While the book is a short 143 pages, but is jam-packed with insightful information that is presented in a matter-of-fact way. It covers everything from consumerism, marketing, writing poetry, cultural conversation, the accumulation of material, and there is even a model that Zaid puts forth at the end of the book, metaphoric, beautiful, and somewhat strange, which holds its ground through several essays.

And while it is accessible enough to hold an audience across the literate board, the information provided comes off as profound and necessary, new and bold. I took the liberty of marking certain passages that have been the most insightful, and providing responses to these passages that extend the conversation.

“Today intelligent conversation and contemplative leisure cost infinitely more than the accumulation of cultural treasures. We now have more books than we can possibly read. The knowledge accumulated in our pint culture infinitely surpasses the learning of Socrates. In a survey of reading habits today, Socrates would score low. His scant scholarship and his lack of academic titles, foreign languages, resume, and published work would prevent him from competing for important posts in the cultural bureaucracy, which would confirm his criticism of the written word: The simulation and credentials of learning have come to carry more weight than learning itself.” (pgs. 37-38)

Usually when historic implications are made, I tend to frown. But in this case, Zaid presents a valid point that students in high schools and colleges should pay attention to. If you’re studying this ancient philosopher who criticized literature and emphasized conversation, what relevant impact will it even have on a day and age where conversation has even surpassed what we knew about it yesterday?

In several years there may be a lull in the way technology affects our daily routines–there is only so much a person can take from technology (though jobs require us to push forward–check that Blackberry one more time, please!) before they need to escape. Just look at our inhibitions to smash our cell phones when drunk, or drop them in the toilet accidentally, or lose them. We aren’t that attached if we can let these slip-ups occur.

But Zaid wrote this 2003 publication probably around 2000, maybe 2001 at the latest, and I feel like the new conversation was just starting to infiltrate the front lines of culture then. E-books certainly weren’t huge yet, and they still aren’t huge in a dominating way, even today (just as Zaid says in another essay about his own time). But ultimately what it comes down to is the accumulation of stuff, and with the digital, the accumulation is endless. You can’t possibly fathom how much stuff is possible to obtain with our current external data storages. It’s absurd; and yet, there’s a fine line between accumulation and accumulating to advance yourself. The former is very easy, the latter almost impossible.

I download something like 30 albums a week because I can, because the way I download them makes them free, but ultimately having them on a hard drive that might simply get run over by a truck in the near future (a reset button of sorts) is a very big waste of time for me; but I’m hooked into the system. Same with books, though now to a lesser extent. For the current age, it’s all about knowing all of the journals, particularly online. I favorite a new journal every day. Logically it will be impossible for me to A) find a poetic voice with such influence going on; and B) if I never read the journals, it will be impossible for me to ever understand which journals I should submit to without doing several years of worth of reading this year’s journal releases.

“Culture, in the anthropological sense of “way of life,” manifests and reproduces itself live, but it is also a collection of works, tools, codes, and repertoires that may or may not be inert text. The same is true of culture in the limited sense of “cultural activities.” In both senses, what is important about culture is how alive it is, not how many tons of dead prose it can claim.” (pgs. 40-41)

But now, with digital archiving, there is no real review system. We all say that culture is alive and well but we do not even know what the culture is; we are not even able to know whether the presence of culture means its alive or dead. So is it better to have a lot of information sitting there, getting ready to wade through it on our own terms, when we feel like it? Or is this risking an inevitable WALL-E scenario, where we won’t even be able to take care of our own cultural waste, where we will have to create something to filter through it ourselves.

The quick answer is: we’ve already created it (Google, and other search engines–we consider them very objective yet do we even know how it really works?) but the long answer is: will we even be able to fix it by the time we realize that massive amounts of information is, in fact, a problem? I remember one time playing a game on a computer back in high school and my computer was pretty old but I really wanted to play this game–a first person shooter, the next thing, so bad–and so I ran it and prayed that it would run smoothly even though I should have said: just wait–go find a job and get a better computer, then you’ll be able to have fun. But I loaded it up and lo! The thing ran so slow, and it was so hard to even shut down the application. Actually, fittingly, this was not the only time I had to shut the application down; usually I resorted to restarting the computer because the system’s memory took so long to process even a simple “quit” command.

Each year it seems like it takes more and more new things to show that humanity, or at least American humanity, is still a culturally vibrant thing. When are we going to become a more nostalgic culture that relays the past into the present? When are we going to sit around and read old books, ride old bikes, use old machinery? With all the people in the world, new discoveries can probably be made with old technology and culture. Culture does not always have to be hyper, spastic, and schizophrenic.

“Boredom is the negation of culture. Culture is conversation, liveliness, inspiration. In championing books that matter to us, we can’t restrict ourselves to increasing sales, printings, number of titles, news, cultural events, jobs, costs, and all other measurable quantities. the important thing is creative vitality, which we can sense if not measure; it lets us know when we’re headed in the right direction, although there are no set rules for encouraging it.” (pg. 41)

I think set rules can be found in the patterns in which we influence one another. Reading material for an intelligent, and usually educated or educatable individual is often dictated by the rules of the cultural guides: you’ve got Mephistophelian characters on every door step.

The media (magazines, newspapers, and even journals) often provide easily-accessible reviews–to every audience, mind you, which makes it a staple–that encourages or dissuades individuals to and from certain literature, or other creative interest. This results in a “creative vitality” that is often inspiring. When I pick up Esquire, I usually know that the books they are talking about are those that I know little about, and I feel, or maybe I used to feel (before I started addressing this metaphysical concern) that to be in the know, to be in the conversation of culture, would be to listen to this great voice of reason hanging out one step ahead of me.

The academy works in a similar way. We find certain scholars, classes, professors, and groups throughout campuses around the country and world that offer communities. These containments offer social answers, solutions and rhymes/reasons to why we should carry out our existence. Marxist groups pop up. Your mentors hand you a book and say: this will change your life because it changed mine. Knowing how the academic environment exists is the easiest way to understand how the entire world exists. Mentors are everywhere; book clubs are everywhere; parents buy their children certain books that influenced them, or agree to buy literature that will probably influence them (or video games or candy or toys . . . endlessness).

The mentors come in all shapes and sizes, but there is a level of pride that keeps the trend going, and ultimately results in the rules to which we are more bound than able to follow. If you deny what everyone tries to put upon you, you may still find creative vitality, but you will ultimately be an outsider; if you find a completely new thing and share it, then you will be following in the footsteps of many (I have been one to do this personally with discovered music, especially in late high school and early college) and it will feel good. To give a gift or open a door and get thanked or appreciated for it is both vain but relieving. We love to be loved; and we love our tastes to be acknowledged and loved as well. But if you have these great influences and they really are marvelous and you choose not to share them with anyone, then what is the point to life? It is like stealing a secret from yourself, like Golem taking the One Ring, and living out your entire existence until you are a wrinkled, miserable old being. Our current society does not like that.

“A two-year-old child is at the dinner table with her parents; they are talking to guests in a language that she has never heard before. All of a sudden, she starts to babble, as if she were speaking that language. She wants to participate in the conversation and is confident that she can. In a way, this child is repeating the adventure of learning to talk. And if she lived in the country of the friends who are visiting, she would surely master their language, the same way people learn to swim: by diving right in. Observing this urge to communicate, Paul Goodman believed that children could learn to read spontaneously; that the problem was school, which made them lose the desire. With a grade-school teacher’s Socratic irony, he said that if children went to school from the day they were born in order to be taught how to speak, a good percentage of the population would be unable to do so, or would stutter.” (page 42)

We often dive right into cultural languages and most often than not do not look into the implications of the language learning. Most often than not there are certain languages–spoken word, body language, written language, or other forms of communication (new media, et cetera)–that go undiscovered for our entire lifetime. I discovered there was something wrong with my progression in understanding foreign languages (I took Latin for two years but was never good at it) a long time ago, but it really took off in the middle of college. I got very depressed for not knowing foreign languages like essentially all of my friends, but never did anything to change my state of existence. Instead I would use the computer language I had learned through high school (no, not coding, though I did learn a little HTML), but rather, the cultural and habitual language of computer use, and I continued to maintain it, grasp it.

But it was like a slave-owner and a slave–I never went any further to enhance my skill set even though it was right there in front of me, well-oiled, disciplined. Today I have the desire and materials to learn German, and I have a couple dictionaries so I could learn Hungarian if I wanted, but I keep coming back to the Internet language, and keep trusting in it. Maybe this summer I will know how to break free, but where is the motivation? The incentive? Most of the college jealousy is gone, and my most immediate despairs involve finding a house to live in for the summer. But that house might turn into the crib that is needed.

The problem is that we dive right in, and often even when we do dive right in, all other efforts are like the stutters mentioned in the quote. Because we go towards what is most appealing to learn. For me, it was the Internet. And then everything else that isn’t as practical–both in learning in a school and on one’s own–becomes a chore that is only stutterable. Hell, even my speech capacities have been at a minimum these days, and I am more self-conscious than I was in junior high, which is phenomenally horrid, but at least we can understand why. Though I love walking around Philadelphia and enjoying the sights and sounds, there’s really no need for me to leave this computer terminal, where the stutters are in the form of fingers hitting the wrong key, but ultimately no one can see these fingers anyway.

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“Even in the absence of gods, his life, or dance, was always prayerful.”

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The difficulty in writing books about ideas, or problems, is usually in the delivery. How do you present your predicament–moral, spiritual, or otherwise–to the reader without coming off as dry or cowardly? How do you turn a riveting topic into more than just a proof? How do bring your ideas into fruition via an engaging narrative with characters whose liveliness you can trust or resent?

Australian Nobel Laureate Patrick White’s novel the Solid Mandala (Penguin 1966, 69) is a worthy attempt at the novel of ideas. Through its following of Waldo and Arthur Brown, dominance and sheeply minion personified, the book attempts to cover as many existential tracks as possible in its mere 316 pages. But ultimately it is no Magic Mountain or Death in Venice, no Crime and Punishment or Brothers Karamazov.

The book is divided into four main sections. The first section sets the scene’s social and cultural background. What is Australia like in the early 20th century? This is a world where misogyny runs rampant, women are trained to be afraid and care for little, and public transportation is more of a paradoxical necessity than a tool that is to be understood and loved. There is a hint throughout this short introductory block that the world White is painting for us, as realistic as Hemingway or Steinbeck, is also just as queasy in its farcical qualities. It’s a sad, haunting entrapment that ultimately leads to the demise at the end of the novel–but the astute enrapturing of, say, one of the Bronte sisters provides much more evidence that the book’s corners are worth the wait. White? He’s got a lot of cotton in his mouth and not necessarily anything he’s saying behind it is worth listening to.

In the second and third sections, White inspects the lives of two brothers, twins Waldo and Arthur Brown, who grow old together living in near-poverty on Terminus Road in some small town, Australia–the same town the women that are on the bus in the first section inhabit. Waldo is the logical, intellectual of the two; he knows philosophy and literature and the arts and is always in torment because of it or because of his brother’s attempt to follow the same path. Arthur, the bumbling half-wit, ultimately socializes better, lives better, and survives better than his struggling artist brother. Arthur is lead into honing his own creativity, which amounts to a significantly graceful presentation far more divine than any of Waldo’s essays, the novel reaches its height. But even when Arthur has succeeded in becoming the real treasure of the fraternal relationship, the novel is more disgusting and disheartening than any one really wants it to be. There is no magic, no pleasure. It is the Iceman Cometh without the alcoholism. It is a long train to nowhere that continues on in hopes of finding something that simply does not glitter by the end.

And the end? Back to Steinbeck. Back to Of Mice and Men. Ultimately the closer White gets to getting over the stone wall and finding the answers to his ideas, the higher the wall extends, revealing less about our tracked characters, showing us more about the cyclical nature of the world we live in. This is the problem of a book composed of problems. The narration is the greater focus but it is ultimately lacking, and thus the problems and all associated ideas get lost in the undercurrent as well.

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What You Can Learn from Jack Spicer

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Choice Quotes from a Choice Text: 2008’s My Vocabulary Did This To Me

Everything posted below, taken straight out of Jack Spicer’s collected poems, My Vocabulary Did This To Me, which I read straight through from cover to cover last week, was chosen to be posted below because it’s very difficult to get a good judge of a book nowadays from the cover alone. Though it’s probably true that Spicer is popular enough in the university and underground lit-circles that many people will get exposed to him in one way or another, what about the skeptics? Read on, I say!

From After Lorca (1957)

“Some poems are easily laid. They will give themselves to anybody and anybody physically capable can receive them. They may be beautiful (we have both written some that were) but they are meretricious. From the moment of their conception they inform us in a dulcet voice that, thank you, they can take care of themselves. I swear that if one of them were hidden beneath my carpet, it would shout out and seduce somebody. The quiet poems are what I worry about–the ones that must be seduced. They could travel about with me for years and no one would notice them. And yet, properly wed, they are more beautiful than their whorish cousins.” (138)

“Loneliness is necessary for pure poetry.” (150)

“It was a game, I shout to myself. A game. There are no angels, ghosts, or even shadows. It was a game out of summer and freedom and a need for ap oetry that would be more than the expression of my hatreds and desires. It was a game like Yeats’ spooks or Blake’s sexless seraphim.” (153)

From Admonitions (1957)

“Muses do exist, but now I know that they are not afraid to dirty their hands with explication–that they are patient with truth and commentary as long as it doesn’t get into the poem, that they whisper (if you let yourself really hear them), “Talk all you want, baby, but then let’s go to bed.” (157)

“But what, you will be too polite to ask me, is the point? Are not these poems all things to all men, like Rorschach ink blots or whores? Are they anything better than a kind of mirror?” (157)

“Mirror makers know the secret–one does not make a mirror to resemble a person, one brings a person to the mirror.” (157)

“The trick naturally is what Duncan learned years ago and tried to teach us–to to search for the perfect poem but to let your way of writing of the moment go along its own paths, explore and retreat but never be fully realized (confined) within the boundaries of one poem. This is where we were wrong and he was right, but he complicated things for us by saying that there is no such thing as good or bad poetry. There is–but not in relation to the single poem. There is really no single poem.” (163)

“The poems belong nowhere.” (163)

“Poems should echo and re-echo against each other. They should create resonances. They cannot live alone any more than we can. (163)

From A Book of Music (1958)

“Poetry ends like a rope.” (178)

From Billy the Kid (1958)

“The word steals from the word, the sound from / the sound. Even / The very year of your life steals from the last one.” (192)

From Fifteen False Propositions Against God (1958)

“Even in a poem / One forgets the real world.) / Fuzzy heads of fuzzy people / Like the trees Williams saw. Drop / The words drop / Like leaves from a fuzzy tree” (197)

From Letters to James Alexander (1958-59)

“There are people that talk about poetry like tired insurance clerks talk about baseball. They must be destroyed by our silence. ven the hatred of them interrupts the conversation that our poems wish to continue. even the mention of them makes it me talking, crashes into paradox that was their truth.” (209)

From “A Textbook of Poetry” in The Heads of the Town up to the Aether (1960)

“Surrealism is the business of poets who cannot benefit by surrealism. It was the first appearance of the Logos that said, ‘The public be damned,’ by which he did not mean that they did not matter or he wanted to be crucified by them, but that really he did not have a word to say to them. This was surrealism.” (299)

“To be lost in a crowd. Of images, of metaphors (whatever they were), of words; this is a better surrender. Of the poet who is lost in the crowd of them. Finally.” (299)

“Or as if all our words without the things about them were meaningless.” (299)

“The wires dance in the wind of the noise our poems make. The noise without an audience. Because the poems were written for ghosts.” (300)

“The poet thinks continually of strategies, of how he can win out against the poem.” (301)

“All that we do in bed, or sleep, or sex is limited by this circle which can only be personally defined.” (303)

“On the outside of it is what everybody talks about. On the outisde of it are the dead that try to talk.” (303)

“Boredom is part of the Logos too.” (304)

“Every city that is formed colelcts its slums and the ghost of it. Every city that is formed collects its ghosts.” (305)

“The city redefined becomes a church. A movement of poetry. not merely a system of belief but their beliefs and their hearts living together.” (306)

“Surrealism is a poem more than this. The intention that things do not fit together.” (306)

“Magic, which is trying to hold onto people with your own hands, is funny while surrealism is not funny. There is a place where we can talk and we cannot talk. Both of us.” (309)

“To create the beautiful again. It is as if somehow the lovers of postage stamps had created an image of themselves. A red wheelbarrow or a blue image of the unknown. And each stamp we put on the letters they send us must be cancelled, heartlessly. As if its delivery, the beautiful image of it, were a metaphor.” (310)

“We are all alone and we do not need poetry to tell us how alone we are.” (311)

From Map Poems (1963-64)

“Love makes the discovery wisdom abandones.” (369)

From “Sporting Life” in Language (1963-95)

“The trouble with comparing a poet with a radio is that radios / don’t develop scar tissue.” (373)

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More Poetry with Straight Lines

Book of My Nights

In Book of My Nights (Boa Editions, 2001), Chinese-American poet Li-Young Lee manages to reference “honey” at least three times. Other quirky references include: “fruit,” “birds,” “fabric,” “night,” and an almost symphonic release to various members of the immediate and extended family.

Family, love, marriage, brotherhood, and children are among the more emotionally potent figures that dominate the shards of inference throughout the book.

The bio note in the back of the book says that Li-Young works at a factory in Chicago. This was in 2001 when the book was released, and after minor research I have found not a single update on his life, so who knows if Li-Young still works there; however, the aside about the factory is actually helpful in understanding his poetry as a form of meditation and even a gentle but necessary escape from some vague, terrible monotony.

You don’t get much urban or machinery in any of these poems, which shows great discipline, and obvious influence from traditional Chinese/Japanese poets. Instead, you get a zeroing in on a form of salvation, important ties to some greater purpose, whether through “God,” or the ultimate aesthetic balance of nature:

The birds don’t alter space.
They reveal it. The sky
never fills with any
leftover flying. They leave
nothing to trace. It is our own
astonishment collects
in chill air. Be glad.

Each stammer is pleasantly collaborated on through visions of philosophic mystery . . .

How is he going to explain
the moon taken hostage, the sea
risen to fill up all the mirrors?

How is he going to explain the branches
beginning to grow from his ribs and throat,
the cries and trills starting in his own mouth?

. . . and ultimately surrealism that has operatic value in its potenty irrational complexity:

Someone’s separating
the white grains of his insomnia
from the black seeds
of his sleep.

Ultimately Li-Young’s book is a quick read but it gets the job done well. It’s a delightful romp through a “day-book,” or more appropriately, “night-book,” that is also subtly unpredictable in its dynamic range of styles. At times the work seems too simplistic, too quiet, but every approach in this book is not without purpose, and it’s purpose is not, surprisingly, simply to vent the insomnia or depression through verse. There is a higher element of peace overarching the pages that sets them in a gentle, smokey fire.

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On Reviews

I have found it excruciatingly difficult to review any of the fiction I have been reading since taking a more active conversation role with the communists. Quite unfortunate, but I have been reading nonetheless.

Lolita was great. A worthy follow-up to my Nabokovian introduction via the Defense. A compiled accordion of quotes I pulled from my dusty, old and tattered copy (analogous in many ways to Humbert Humbert, our dirty, old, and quite perverted protagonist narrator) can be found here.

I also read through, with agony and pleasure, Saul Bellow’s Herzog, a sprawling work based in Chicago, New York, and even Philadelphia. Who knows when and how that behemoth of mental treachery can be approached–with every day I think, I’m losing more and more of this. It’s a labyrinth I don’t know I should venture back into. But the summation is this: written in the late 50s, it’s a modern American writer’s response to the problem novels of Thomas Mann and the 19th C. Russians. Go humanism, go Romanticism and Enlightenment.

In other news, there were some cell phone poems recently posted and some work poems, based on a new and simple exercise that is both humbling and enough distraction from the trauma of working retail. See below for an abstract and link to more creative work.

In otherly news:

Free Zinn available for reading.

Speaking of free political texts?

Videos from the Dodge Poetry Festival–it’s like you are really there in one of the chairs dreaming about some pleasing verse, and where did the fashion sense of artists go?! Poets need to start acting like clowns and zigzags once in a while!

and PS: Winnie the who?

Two segments of recent creativity:

“Because it’s just not for”

In response to her mother,
who stood outside the bookstore,
looking at the palisade of red
romance novels and green mysteries,
who asked with a grave monotony
of the store next door to me
that I don’t like to think about,
because it’s just not for me,
“What’s in there?” the girl
all pinks and sweatpants,
wearing her smile like a saber,
lazily responded, destroying
both my moment and my ease:
“Beautiful diamonds and stuff.”

From “After Ringing Up Jena Swan”:

I

Her bright magenta pea coat
wraps tightly around her
frame like skin, skin whipping
around like raw flesh hanging
in flaps but youthful and fresh still
and being the best for everyone’s
eyes as a choice garment or cloth
blossom not matching her any
better than how it’s supposed to.

(read more here at In Memory of My Feelings)

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“The gigantic Gatling gun loomed over the herd like an immense piece of bad news.”

Forty Stories

In the introduction to Forty Stories, David Eggers proclaims D.B.’s short fiction as both masterly and easily-discardable in the 21st century. This type of statement is important to people who may or may not want to check out Barthelme’s work merely because what was so genre-defying during the time of the writing is far more commonplace and even normal, or regular, today. The postmodern climate does indeed call for more flash fiction and explosively odd presentations of style, plot, and all other literary content within a piece (though cohesiveness and coherency in a work is still in high demand; and while fragmentary work is popularly written, it is my conceit that the strangest works will never really be read in a mainstream setting on a massive level–did Burroughs’s Naked Lunch or his other cut-ups get massive attention outside of academia, for instance?) and it’s important to read Barthelme to get a sense of the period that this powerful “new” approach was being implemented, designed, toyed with, and ultimately published–by Barthelme of course.

Richard Brautigan is perhaps the easiest “popular” writer to compare Barthelme’s work with, with Vonnegut and David Foster Wallace closely behind. The stories are almost entirely sarcastic, ironic, or emulations of black humor on some level. In presenting his stories, Barthelme often incorporates a serious tone that reads appropriately serious as well until you take a look behind the initial surprise and see that every monotonous speaker, every heart-breaking cry and alcoholic slur–it’s all parodying the extremities of the world we live in–which, as the introduction of Forty Stories and the introduction to Sixty Stories that’s included in this volume (the former being written by Eggers, the latter being written by David Gates), often draw upon the absurd, the Godless, the hyper-cultured, and the magical in order to accomplish. One of the stories in this volume, often cited for some reason or another, is called “Conversations with Goethe,” and is told from the point of view, perhaps, of one of Goethe’s pupils/friends/advisors/lovers. You never really know, but you do know that Goethe says a lot of crazy shit that he probably didn’t say in real life but that Barthelme has decided to build upon, making for a great story. This is laugh out loud funny. This is dynamite in the hand funny. Loony Tunes or political slips.

In “January,” the last story in the volume, Thomas Brecker, a theologian/scholar of philosophy. This character is fictional but this interview reads like nonfiction, which is almost always the case when Barthelme really chisels his characters through his story. You never know too much about them, but you believe them so much, or don’t believe them at all, but they always seem so real, so ready to exist in the same world as you. The fictional account of Brecker reveals some of Barthelme’s literary underpinnings through Brecker’s studies: “I argued that acedia is a positive reaction to extraordinary demand, for example, the demand that one brace the good news and become one with the mystical body of Christ.” And like Brecker, Barthelme is embracing the maniacal culture of humanity, megacultures that are by the insane for the insane, but Barthelme’s stories reflect his embrace. Some of the stories really are depressing, especially those about a man-woman relationship, which usually, like Raymond Carver or Jhumpa Lahiri, regards foremost the negative decay of such relationships . . . but through turning to the absurd Barthelme takes on usually a hilarious, positive spin through our world and shows how stupid we humans usually are.

Just read “The Baby,” an ultra-short story that’s also right near the end of the book, which describes the inane ridiculousness that parents will undergo in order to punish their children, try to control their children, who they might have no control over anyway (or are they just blind to what the child needs to change?): “When I added up her indebtedness, in terms of hours, I could see that she wasn’t going to get out of her room until 1992, if then. Also, she was looking pretty wan. She hadn’t been to the park in weeks. We had more or less of an ethical crisis on our hands.”

Barthelme’s strongest quality is in his versatility. Every story is different. While many draw on common plotlines, relationships or character pairings, or even similar tones and moods, the themes and structure and style of each story are usually pretty different from one another. One minute you might be reading a story that is dead serious and only by the end do you realize that sardonic writing is supposed to be funny; or you might read something and laugh out loud at the first line (“Captain Blood” is a good example); or you might find the writing merely clever, which it usually always is–but the Forty Stories offered in this collection don’t hesitate to provide.

Barthelme can easily be overshadowed in any number of ways by contemporary writers, but his stories are solid and poetic even past the gimmicks that they and other writers do employ. Once you get underneath the surface, you may gaze in some places that you may never knew you could have gazed before.

This book is great for fans of postmodern lit, experimental writing, short fiction, Dave Eggers, Brautigan.

If you want to read Barthelme’s work before checking out one of his books, go to this amazing website that includes many of his short stories.

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